Very good, in my opinion. The only thing I'd change is, "That is after Casey killed Caylee. . ." I've never been totally sure Casey did kill Caylee.
Remember the 911 call where Casey stressed it had been 31 days since she'd seen her daughter? A little reference to the "script" perhaps?
In my opinion, of course.
The script thingy is probably what she came up with in jail trying to get her out of some of her first lies. But she forgets than SHE didn't call in to report Caylee missing, Caylee's grandma did that after she discovered Casey, an event I don't think Casey was ready for yet. I think Caylee's mom was planning another cover story to account for the missing baby but I don't think she'd finished yet. For all we know, Casey, if left to her own devises, wouldn't have called to report Caylee missing after 60 days or 90, or never. We had the Aarone Thompson case here in Colorado where it took maybe a couple of years for anyone to notice they were missing a kid and to start asking questions (and a couple more years to arrest someone.) Children are sort of at the mercy of their parents here. If parents move or tell stories, the baby could go unaccounted for a long time. Personally, I think Cindy would have come after Casey for Caylee no matter what she did or where she went, which is why I think Casey knew she needed to come up with something good...just hadn't been able to do that yet...and was having too much fun at the clubs and sleeping around to work on it much...probably isn't that smart. After all, she's a pathalogical liar not an author or profiler. She's really not much of a 'think-ahead,' planning sort of person. And her lies have always worked for her before but she really isn't a great liar, even though she was sometimes elaborate. It's just that the stakes had never been this high before, and in the past, she's been able to slide by. In a situation where people really started asking hard questions and demanding answers that made sense, her level of skill wasn't anywhere near up to it.
Back to the park kidnapping with the script. Where is the script? Is there actually one, or was it lost with the phone, left in a random bed somewhere or baked into the brownies? If there is a physical script, it wouldn't have been composed on Casey's or an other Anthony's computer, would it by any chance? It was past thirty days when Cindy called the police, why not tell the cops? She also forgets that she has no way to prove the ZFG EVER lived anywhere in Orlando. I'm guessing that they never talked on the phone or exchanged e-mails to arrange baby-sitting, or has any other proof that "Zanny The Nanny" ever existed, except possibly in book form. Why on earth would someone trust a phatom babysitter, without an address or phone number who held you down and took your kid more than the police? Why would anyone not co-operate to help find their baby...unless they were trying to escape prosecution? Kidnappers could be selling your baby and the trail is getting colder by the second. They could be shooting *advertiser censored* with her as the star. They could be raping her, killing her. Why on earth wouldn't you tell the police, convince them that you had nothing to hide and get them looking immediately by giving them truthful, veryifiable information about the last time you saw your baby and with whom?! Unless you had something really bad to hide.