I've said this way earlier in the threads, but it still bothers me. It's the thing that always rattled my cage from the very beginning; this bit of his released appeal to Helen when she was missing:
"I hope you hear this message and listen carefully"
Listen carefully? I've never, ever understood it in any natural sense of her being missing and it was the first time I was absolutely sure he had something to do with it.
Why would you ever say that to someone who is missing? Of course they would be listening carefully. It's so redundant, but also so aggressive.
Eurgh, every time I read it on an article, it grinds my gears.
Good catch!
As I have mentioned before, Murderer as amateur script writer is a particular fascination of mine.
These perps always make the mistake of included large amounts of exposition in their work - probably because they get their ideas off television
Quality script writing tries to keep exposition down though you sometimes need a bit to help the plot along or remind the viewers what is happening.
But of course real life does not include exposition, foreshadowing or other cinematic techniques!