BoldBear
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The perfect explanation for a RN and a body in the wc just eludes me. :facepalm: As, imo, it did the Rs.
I spent a couple of years writing a novel that focused on the hours of when they got home, their past, and what happened the next morning. It's a theory and I probably didn't tell the story very well. I only asked two people to have a look at it and since they haven't had anything to say, I assume that I've completely missed the mark. I went in with every little crazy detail, but the root of the theory is fairly good. I'll post the heart of that theory soon so you can decide for yourself.
The first chapter's a snooze and if I ever tried to market the book, I'd have to add a four paragraph gimmick to hook the reader at the beginning.
If any active members would like to take a look at it, I can send a PDF copy through email. The only thing I ask is for you not to share it with others and to be honest about it. Don't spare my feelings. Tell me it sucks and this is why. I won't hold it against you. This was my first attempt at fiction after being away from it for 20 years. If you're interested, send me a private message with an email address. If you have a different way to receive to document that assures your privacy, let me know how that can be done and I'll try to the other method.
The theory actually answers some of the questions you asked. I get carried away an throw everything in so I guess the heart of the theory gets missed.