Gannon
The novel
(If only it were)
Before I begin my next draft,
Questions/puzzle pieces
Purely MOOO, speculations and curiosity:
MOOLetecia was somehow involved in ex-husband’s death. She may have directly
Or indirectly involved HH. Both did benefit
perhaps from life insurance policy, w/ Letecia as guardian(not guardian ad litem)
HH 13 yrs old, hard to believe willing
participant. Money may have been tight before, then things became much.JMHO
???Would child support continue if Letecia
married Al? How did Letecia benefit from Hunt’s death? How did HH benefit?MOO
Letecia would not have gotten rid of Hunt, unless she had a new source of income, (Stauch)combined w/ some from Hunt.
One step ahead, alwaysJMHO
Landen was one of Hunt’s nieces, perhaps a favorite. SHE did not like Letecia. She saw thru her facade in intuitive way, but never
had any evidence, so she watched...PPOP
Letecia comes in contact w/ Landen and
Al, research later. Game on! they were NOT friends on softball team. Deployments, training, OCS weekends, tension in marriage. Letecia seizes opportunity, every chance, gaslights both Landen and Al...MOO
Letecia needs custody of kids for child support...do not know how the custody
WAR was won, Landen’s every weakness
Exposed along w/ her desire for kids
to have best opportunity. Letecia was right there fighting w/ Al ... later, unsure whether this will prequel or first chapter.JMHO